Thank you so much for this. I very much appreciate the efforts you took to write this story, and so glad you did so. Incredibly well-written, and utterly captivating. I’m also a fan of Game of Thrones, so seeing references was a pleasant surprise. I’m also beyond happy for Yevanna and Loki, along with their son Fenrir.

Too soon! :/
It's only chapter 7...

Don't get me wrong, I love this story but my own feelings can't come to terms with her accepting being tricked so easily.

I will never understand why people enjoy the concept of being forced into marriage...

You're an amazing writer and this story is just lovely, quickly became one of my favs.
Unlike many other stories where the OC is nothing but a damsel in distress, Yeva is a perfect match for Loki's character in intelligence, strength and humor, love it!

Hey,

I really loved your story, the plot, the characters and the way you write Loki, Thor and such.. I spent great hours reading your work ! It was very well written and I greatly enjoyed the OC, for she was unique and realistic in this Thor Univers.

A french fan,
Kuramaxchan

I can see where Beowulf comes from I mean if my friend is hanging out with someone known for lying and tricking people I'd warn her too nevertheless I don't like him

I have just finished reading this and I just don't have the words to describe how much I loved it. The depths of your characters, the storyline...everything, had me reading nonstop. I loved how some parts mirrored the movies and how some were similar but slightly different. You wrote a wonderful, amazing story.

I just finished binge reading your story, and I am so sorry you plan to take it down, though I wish you good luck with making it into an original :). I have to say that of all the Loki fics I've read this is definitely one of my favorites. I thoroughly enjoyed the characters you've made, and the plot, and I hope to have the chance to read your original fiction once you're done.

Gorgot? Neck armour. I think.

I suspected he had something to do with a certain mysterious death. His hold on reality is ever tenuous. Now he's probably going to snap spectacularly and either kill the King or force a marriage. I meant rape. But that's distasteful. Ew.

I can't believe any self respecting horse would allow a goblin to ride them, poor babies. Awesome fight scene! In terms of Asgard I'd say we are still primitive. Yay.

Nice chapter.

Beowulf POV does come across as level headed, ut then I remeber to add a Gaston tone/MO and ew.

Hmm, I'm wondering how tou will work Thor . . . brashness in. Impatience, eh I cannot think of the word right now. Douchness from the movie comes to mind