Excellent story. Good voices, good pacing, well-done OCs, happy ending. And I liked your "possibilities" chair at the end. Thanks!

Fabulous! When I realized that Arthur knew about Merlin, I was annoyed that I'd have to try to find all the clues, and then you gave me the perfect summary from Arthur's POV!

I'm really enjoying this story for the second time. Thanks so much for sharing your imagination and time with us.

This story was amazing! I enjoyed it thoroughly, and I was pleasantly surprised at it went on, and the writing kept improving. Excellent plot, characters, and narration. I don't think I can expect anything else, and it have my hat out to you. I haven't read such a well written Mergana in a long time. Bravo!

An absolutely beautiful story! I was laughing, crying, and everything in between. This is exactly how I imagined a more happy ending to Merlin and you put it into words, so thank you! You are an incredible writer and I look forwrd to seeing more of you work in the future!

...Morgana doesn't know Emrys as Dragoon...actually Merlin just called himself Dragoon once the rest of it he called himself Emrys...

I'm sure that there are no healing spells...cause the price of saving someone is another life is it not?

Oh lord, this story was SO. GOOD.

It was so very interesting, and contained many new ideas that I'd never seen before in a Merlin fic (which is not an easy feat, because fanfiction pretty much guarantees that everything anyone could ever think of is somewhere on the web already).

You really did a great job with it, thank you for sharing it with us :D

This is great story you're a good writer. I read that story it was a good one.

AWESOME! You are very good at writing stories like this and its awesome how much effort you put into it most people won't do that. Keep writing you are great at it. You should ask to publish this fanfic as a book,I think a lot of people would read it(I would anyway). Anyway GREAT fanfic I really hope you write a lot more if their this cool. Have an awesome life and BE BLESSED.

This is excellent! I have read literally hundreds of fanfictions about Merlin, particularly reveal fictions, and this one has all kinds of new stuff. Very cool. Thank you!

What can I say gerrard01. But kudos. the story is great and epic and again appreciated more with you explaining why you wrote what you wrote. I wish there'll be another... and another...

Will there be a sequel, possibly following the line of Dragoon finding the tattoos and returning, only to find Camelot under attack again? If there was that would be freaking awesome. I'd read it.

Thanks gerrard. I enjoyed the insight into the 'construction' of your story.
So much thought goes into such a wonderful tale - but truly worth it from a readers point of view.
Thanks again.

Thanks so much for this beautiful, epic story. Finally, after so much of the impossible things that seems too impossible to surmount, Mergana had each other in each other's arms. Absolutely elated. BTW, what an epic battle and awesome magical display you wrote. And vividly described. So amazing to read on and on. And the travel to the netherworld. I thought at first that Morgana will again succumb to her emotions, unpredictable as it is, but you made her so sensible and really in love this time. So glad you made her so human and a woman not that senseless, emotionless witch in the series. Well, Merlin was also made that way in the series though. Kudos gerrard01. Wish you'll have more to come in this fanfic.