I think you should write more like this and other one you write on the parent,s believing in the guardians and why they don't tell the kids they can see them, when you can, please and thank you.

yes. so much yes. I cannot comprehend.
no really. this is a realistic take on things, with a very wise and very protective Jamie that I love. thanks for making this, honestly.

I love the sincerity. The way Jamie went to protect his sister, carefully worked around his mother, then did not brazenly instigate anything with Pitch. Rather, spoke openly and honestly with him and left himself open to understanding his point of view. The empathy was greatly appreciated and worked in so naturally to the story. Major kudos for a lovely and heartfelt narrative.

Thus was such a fun read! I loved it, beginning to end. Thanks for the story!

Oh lord...I knew that Jamie was tough, but THAT was amazing.

Nice insight into Pitch...I always he and Jack could've bonded more

Wow, never see this side of pitch in a story before, great job!

I LOVE THIS AHHH H I can't describe how much i love this!

Pitch being dragged away from his job by a little boy. XDDDDD my favorite thing ever.

what did he do?

This is a wonderful work! I'm so glad you wrote this! More people of all ages need to learn about tough love!

lol hahaha

That ending...it cracked me up. I loved it!

Awesome! Great storyline, great message, great writing, and most of all, awesome ending!

Great job! I really enjoyed reading this.

Not much into all the touchy feely stuff with Pitch, but the end was REALLY funny.