Finally remembered to look at this again. It's good, you have all the right ingredients for a decent OC story (character has a background and their own story, deals with OCs apart from themselves. If there's one thing that's weird, it's the tone, part high school antics, part brutal beatings, and I'm left kind of puzzled as to why Sapphire signed on for this. What does she get out of it?

Still entertaining enough to keep me reading, though.

oh my gosh. Wow. That was an ending. Stupid Hojo ruining everything.
I can't believe this. My heart has been destroyed now. Wow. Wowie wowie wow.

oh. oh no. Tell me she's not dead! NOOO

This is so sad I don't know what to feel anymore.

Well you gave an opening, what were you expecting? LOL
That was pretty unexpected jeez Coby.

OH NOOOOOOOO
NO. NOT SEPH DON'T TAKE HIM AWAYY. HE CAN'T BE EVILL

NOOOOOOOO NO NO NO
That's awful. Real awful.

But I'm always stressed.
Ooh hugs! I give hugs and cuddles too! :D :D :D
Yes AC, sign me up!
I knew Sephiroth had something up his sleeve...

I'm not sure if it's because I'm on mobile or it's closed but I can't see the poll on whether to have a sequel or not. I would love if you did. I really want to see what happens to Sapphire now. Where her deams come from and how they will affect things. We're still yet to see the actual events of her last dream with Genesis from a couple chapters back.
Did Nate suspect the truth of the train wreck and that's why he left?

I read this a long time ago, but I've completely forgotten everything that happened. I'll try to catch up, but it could be a while.

ohmygodohmygodohmygOD!
I. Love. This.
I swear, you never fail to surpass my expectations asdjksadaksd
When I read the paragraph of Genesis in Saph's perspective, I was amazed by your use of delicious adjectives but tHE LAST LINE OF THIS CHAPTER-NOOOOOOOOOO!
I knew that Saph was somewhat alive from your reply to my previous review (thank u again for replying so quickly) but wHOA I did NOT expect that cliffhanger... Now I'm thirsting for a sequel even more ;A;

Thank you for finally finishing this fanfiction! You've written this since 2012 so I think you'll be really really proud of yourself (you should be!).

Have a great day! I know I will due to this update:D

WHAT WHAG WHAT AHPPENED MY APOLOGIES BUT MY MIND OS HAVING A HARD TIME RECALLING WHAT HAF HAPPENED.

SORRY SOMEONE EXPLAAAINNN HELELPPPP

Hi there!
I usually don't write reviews because I'm an awkward beanstalk but I just wanted to say thank you for continuing this fanfiction :) I really enjoyed reading this and when I read your AN I freaked out because SAPPHIRE DIED? YOU'RE ENDING THE FANFIC? I simply assumed that she was alive and hiding away but WHAT?! So yes, you can clearly see how panicked I am right now.

Thank you for taking your time to write this, it really brightened my day every time you updated!

Could you clarify a little on the ending of the fanfiction? Does that mean you're writing a sequel? Sorry for the onslaught of questions, I'm just really desperate right now.

I love this story so much! I can't wait for more chapters!

Genesis is gay? :