Nice. I really felt John's out of place/odd man out/lost emotions. Would be interested in reading a follow-up.

Amazing and beautiful! Made me tear up.

... Oh man.

I wouldn't admit that I shipped it until now.

GAH, this is so great and really well-written, though it seems a bit rushed to me. That's all the criticism I can think of.

*goes to sit in the corner and be consumed by feels*

Love it. You're a fantastic writer and I want to read more!

Aside from a few syntax errors and questionable sentence structure (and I believe you switched POV at one point? I'm not quite sure, the wording was a bit odd) it's a very cute little fic. I feel like the time jump could have been handled a bit better, but the characterisation was good and your writing is smooth overall. Defs write more, yo

AMAZING! Managed to stay clean, fluffy and brilliant! 5/5

I LOVE THIS!