that was really good i loved it i cant wait to read the next 2 chapters

how kawaii was that!

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.~ thank you.~

Z

One of the longest, best, original T/P fics out their. Into my favorites it goes!

YOU MUST MAKE A SEQUAL!

wow! That was great! I loved this story alot!

The way you wrote in the beginning is very clumsy but the story was very good

how...SWEET!I LUVED IT!SSSSS!OOOOOOOOOOO!MMMMMMMMMM!UUUUUUUUU!CCCCCCCCCC!HHHHHHHH!hard 2 find a good fic theese days, but this person iz a natuarll writer!

okay, sum jerk is calling themself pan chan? and saying they have chinagirl as a address. they wrote a review for a fanfic about lemons and sumthin like that about it. it wuzn't me!th jerk...oh, this fic wuz good!it wuz so sweet!heehee!p

cute. ;o)

ooooo i luv it! you gotta' make a sequle! plz? *.*

THOSE CHAPTERS WERE ! HEHE Any ways eho have REAL talent (unlike me) and should write MORE! Good Job! ::gigles and skips away::

very PERFECT!

I loved it! It was so sweet! I would love to post your fic on my site, pretty please?

Most original T/P fic I've read so far. Keep up the good work.

Wow! I can't wait to read the next to parts! You're a really good writer!