How to treat the story was. I so enjoyed reading it. Poor Lee.

OOPS! Just after Amanda said, "Go away!" you wrote that Lee entered, then locked the Ladies Room door. So how did those women walk in on them nine paragraphs later?

Lee is perplexed because Amanda's been ultra-secretive, yet she wants him to get rid of the gun in her purse? Add bossiness to being clandestine and no wonder Lee's frustration escalates.

After Amanda resumes her normal role, shehands out cookies to everyone, except Lee. He gets an assortment of items he left behind during his uninvited invasion and occupation of her home. That bit was great comedy!

Love this story! The concept is so much fun! It would be cool though if someday you continued it and Lee found out who Seraphim is.

Sorry, I hadn't seen there was a continuation until it was too late. I loved the ending! Fabulous from start to finish!

I enjoyed both of these stories. Lee's jealousy and protection were well depicted for end of Season 1, as well as his comfortable intrusion into her home - hysterical. I especially liked the line (from CN:S) of "Flattening her back to the wall, she peered around the edge... and looked right into the flat gaze of the man she'd lost." That would have been fun to see in an episode. Nice job!

Your stories have brought back to me just how much I loved this show. I have spent several hours now reading all your stuff and only wish that there were more. Thank you for reminding me how much I loved Lee and Amanda. I hope to see a lot more from you. Thanks again.

Both of these stories about Seraphim were awesome! I loved both Charle's Angels and SCMK. Any plans to continue this series? Even though Amanda doesn't want Seraphim to surface anytime soon, that is usually the best laid plans of mice and men. Maybe it could be set a few years down the road in season 3 or 4. You made the crossover work very well. You had me hooked! It seems like you left it open, who was the voice which one would assume was Rachel talking to about her plans to bring down Scarecrow and the Townsend Agency? If I read it right that was after first warehouse attack that captured both of her henchman. What happened to Bosley towards the end? Is he in on it?

ROTFL! This is so good... The only critique I have is the whole 'Manda thing... it just doesn't suit Lee *at all*. I know he mumbles it in Unfinished Business, but the guy is half-asleep. Otherwise, he never calls her that. I've been around this fandom a looooong time, and maybe you have too. If so, you'll already know that it's an age-old debate, but 'Manda is hated by most, lol. Anyway, loving this.

Dear MeriSalope,

I have truly been enjoying your SMK fanfiction! I love how you create tension with Lee and Amanda and your description of their interaction is spot on. I sincerely hope that you will continue this AU series.

All the Best to You - B. G. Kuro

Well, then, I'm now officially addicted to this AU. Are we going to see more? Will we start seeing external manifestations of Lee's growing awareness of Amanda's merits and charms? Looking forward to more!

Loved this story

Love it..laughed a lot reading it cant wait for #3 :)

I love how Amanda is finally given credit here for having a brain. And given some action. Great writing!

SMK has always been one of my favorite shows. Lightweight and improbable, but tremendous fun. I especially liked Seasons 1 and 2. You captured the subtleties of the characters' relationship very well. Very enjoyable story. Loved the last line. Hope you write more.

You did it again...amazed me! I am surprised you let Lee get of so easily though. Thanks so much for dedicating this to me...what a wonderful birthday present. You have made my day...I know how much time you must have spent on this.b. THANK YOU