Damn! that was awesome! I loved the different points of view...as always, you amaze me each of your stories better than the last!

This would make a good multi-chaptered story! I loved it :)

I have read this 3 weeks ago and I am still thinking about it.
The different point of views make it great and you wrote it perfectly but it is also awful and I like it and I don't like it at the same time? Does that make sense. I understand, that this is a really dark story. But I nedded to wirte this comment, because I can speak with nobody about this.
This is in no way a criticism on your work. You did a really good job with your writing.

I love that Narcissa knew and didn't really care, but accepted that Hermione was his mate. LOL

Bad for Hermione, but an interesting take on the werewolf trope. Particularly interesting is Narcissa's part in this as a woman who'd do anything for her son.

Awful. Brilliant.

Omg LOL Narcissa

You should have more chapters!

Damn Narcissa!

like the surprise there and the end!

i loved it , I mean i would have preferred Hermione willing but i got that it wasn't your plot

Wonderfully written! Of course, I would prefer Hermione to have been willing, but I understand that isn't what you were going for.

I'd love to read more about it :)

How very Slytherin of Narcissa.

Cute story