Great story, I really like how you made their characters grow and how you wrote the interraction between them.

Not gonna lie I thought this might have been a Conley/Maddie story but am very interested to see these other developments !

Peter es lo más gracioso y adorable

Esta historia es genial, muchas gracias

I laughed so hard, I think I hurt myself. That has to be the funniest line ever! I'll never think of Santa Claus the same way again!

I have read this story a dozen times. This chapter makes me grin like a fool every time! Brilliant!

I’ve always pictured Peter looking like 80s heartthrob, Rex Smith, just not as pretty. Tall, kind of shaggy blond hair, good build, commanding presence.

Excuse me while I slip back into one of my high school fantasies, y’all...

this was great! thanks

sounds like maddie and alex could get a really good job with the c.i.a.

maddie and alexander are having to much fun without bella. i picture alexander as alexander skarsgard, who is the most beautiful man i have ever seen. peter i picture as chris hemsworth without the aussie accent.

this has to be the funniest chapter yet!

peter looks like daniel craig twenty five years ago. only taller. victoria doesn't know it yet but she is living on borrowed time. right?

bella kicking rosalie's ass was hilarious and a long time coming. stupid bitch!

maddie is just like my oldest son was at that age. at 14 months he could speak in whole sentences and at not quite 3 he could read. a smart child can learn at an advanced pace if they are interested and a parent spends a lot of one on one time with them. my son now at 53 has owned his own tech business and employs a dozen people. not bad for a kid who dropped out of high school at seventeen, got a ged, joined the army and saw most of europe on the governments dime, and got a college degree before he got out. did i tell you how much i love this story? especially rose and edward getting their asses kicked. what was carlisle thinking sending edward after them when maddie smells just like bella did? did he want edward to drain her?

hahahahahah! i think the animal diet over the years has made the cullens stupid. no wait, they were always stupid.