Reviews for Touch
reika88 chapter 2 . 1/31
wow talk about absolute BULLSHIT
jaminjess8 chapter 12 . 5/3/2016
Please continue! I love this story so much!
nellie chapter 11 . 5/29/2013
O MY GOD .NOOOOO!
Poor ellie...
fanfreak4ever chapter 12 . 5/13/2013
The kids cant see her, can they? They'll learn to, of course, but she's a new spirit, they arent going to have ever heard of her or anything... theyll just wander right through her. BUT SHE'S ALIVE THANK GOD
KurokamiHaruhi chapter 12 . 5/13/2013
HOLY CRAP, I CRIED WITH JACK
But calmed down when she came back to life
GREAT JOB! UPDATE SOON! :)
Q-A the Authoress chapter 12 . 5/13/2013
:D Yay! She's not dead!

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
TenebrisSagittarius chapter 12 . 5/13/2013
Best chapter I have had in months! And now Ellie became what she was meant to be all along. For a moment I was having a heart attack because, I swear, if she had lost her memory I would have kicked someone today. But she didn't! Wiiii! Now let's see how they kick Pitch's butt all the way to Timbuktu.
Question: she won't become a Guardian just yet right? I mean, she just came back, it's waaay to early. Perhaps in a sequel or one-shot. For now on she should be the Spring Spirit...besides Bunny that it.
Update soon!
ashthetyto chapter 11 . 4/4/2013
;( cliffhangers. God's way of p*ssing me off. Please update soon!
Elven Silver Power Ranger chapter 11 . 4/3/2013
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon this story rocks! pitch is sooooooooo creepy : )
ChloeF chapter 11 . 4/1/2013
This is definitely my favorite Jack/OC fanfic!
ChloeF chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Can't wait for the update! pls
Guest chapter 11 . 3/17/2013
This story is so original! I love it! XD The grammar is pretty spot on and the chapters are well articulated. I shall not forgive the author who chooses not to update after a cliffhanger, however. So please update soon!
Oraeliaa chapter 11 . 3/3/2013
this was so good! i'm glad they didnt rush into the romance, this was a really good pace, but GAHH i hate cliffhangers x
Taz.Trafalgar chapter 11 . 2/18/2013
DAME YOU CLIFFHANGER! *shakes fist*, just wanted to say how im loving the story so far and i cant wait for the next chapter :)
Guest chapter 11 . 2/16/2013
Oh my god
That was the best chapter yet! Thank you, thank you for updating! Please sacrifice more of your time for the next chapter! I need to know what will happen!
- kp
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