Love the story so far, and I hope you update again soon.

I like the way you dealt with Willow. She was always a bit too full of her self and seemed to continually think she was smarter than everyone else, no matter the subject. I hope she will get the message that just because she is smart, she doesn’t have the wisdom that age brings you.

I’m hoping that Faith doesn’t go bad now that she people looking out for her. This was always a cruel thing that was done in canon, and I hope you rectify. This also a good point to change Alan getting killed by Faith as Xander can heal him if the mistake does indeed occur.

You do think you might have Giles and Joyce get together? It would be rather funny to have Buffy’s reaction to this. Don’ Forget that now that Xander can heal, Joyce’s tumor should be taken care of. I know most people know that the tumor was a result of the Monks putting Dawn in their lives, but Xander should be able to fix it.

With all the nice changes going on, it would comical fit the Powers That Be, to go into some kind of panic mode, then screw up big time so the upper management gets involved more with the Hellmouth.

I’d really like to see Xander in a relationship with Cordila, Faith, Amy, or Buffy. I’ve not seen Xander and Amy together yet in a story yet. Maybe I just haven’t come across one yet. Oh, well.

Please don’t let this story just fade away. I’d really like it if you would continue. Hope these ideas assist your muse.

Dam this is a nice story, thnxs for writing this.

Good story , I can see the improvements in you writing compared to the earlier chapters of this story and your newer story Wolf's Dawn.

To bad this story has not been updated for a long bit. I would have loved to read Willows interaction with the charmed ones, they would be good mentors for her.

Please update

Is this story dead? It's quite wonderful to read. :)

Well it seems as if the unfortunate delay happened again. Sorry to see that.

I liked the story so far, though I admit, it feels like this is just the beginning... The rest is still missing

coooooooooooooool

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

moreeeeeee

Very cool story! And getting even more exciting as the two 'worlds' begin to crossover even more. :D Looking forward to what happens next as they address Willow's foolishness and Cole's 'mission.'

Good story so far :)

well yes i kind of agree as shown in the real show of willow going dark after tara death i hope it want
happen again i hope willow will do cleansing ritual on her since they do live on hellmouth and all by the
way wiill willow make her own book of shadows any time soon i hope you write more please write chapter 7 love reading this story i put it in favorite follow

Okay, you have some typos.
Your main typo is use of your vs you're and their, there, they're. Those are the major issues.
There is one more issue that's a pet peeve of mine:
"Buffy should be hear soon, Giles do you mind if I use your bathroom to freshen up a bit," Willow asked.
Hear is wrong; it should be here. Also, it's a run-on sentence.
"Buffy should be here soon. Giles, do you mind if I use your bathroom to freshen up a bit," Willow asked.

So very well done! Glad to see the Muse was back in play.

I am so glad that you continued this story!

Personally I liked the explanation you had for Willow's addiction. She, Amy, and eventually Tara would make a fantastic coven. Do you have any plans on establishing Willow as a 'witch progenitor' as seen in other crossover stories? What are Amy's magical powers? Does Willow have an active power?