ypu are great writter. amazing plot, i love the pairing, just perfect, i hope you update someday, see ya :)

I certainly hope there is going to be more.

Omg why isn't there more reviews this is so good to bad there isn't more hopefully soon to e there will (:

WHO CARES ABOUT SCOTT. GO! STISAAC

I’m a sucker for this pairing but as much as I wanted to read this fic, I couldn’t get past the first few paragraphs because of all the errors. It’s something that spellcheck alone can’t catch because technically the words aren’t spelled wrong – they’re just the wrong words, or the words are forgotten, or the wrong tense is used. As helpful as spellcheck can be, human eyes are needed to really shape the story up into readable condition. You should read it through a few times before you post it or find a beta reader to catch the errors.

For example... there aren’t actually any spelling errors in the second paragraph you wrote, but the words in all caps were the wrong word, the wrong tense, or just missing.

"Did you see the cute top Allison was wearing today? It fit her body so well. I wonder what she is wearing under it…" Isaac looked up and FROWNED; he had NOTICED lately that all Scott talked about was the new girl Allison. The blonde didn't understand how Scott could go on and on about one girl that he BARELY KNEW for a week. It was like the girl had poisoned him. Isaac saw Stiles BITE his lips and felt a stirring in his groin. He thought about his father and that TOOK care of any arousal he felt. The bell rang and as he was leaving he saw Scott look at him with a funny face. When doesn't HE have a funny face? Isaac laughed to himself as he walked out of the CLASSROOM.

See why reading it through is important? I’m not trying to be mean and I do hope you’ll work on fixing it up. It’s just that as it is now, all these errors make it difficult to get into the story. Good luck!

Wow this was amazing I enjoyed reading every line :D