Please write more!

This is an awesome story! :) Keep it up! :)

I like it :)

i like a good zombie story so i hope to read more :3

I love a good Zombie apocalypse story. *Gets popcorn*

:)

Clever title, since most people don't associate Zombies with hope.

I felt this fic really only got going with "it was summer." I like what I think you were trying to do with your framing technique and the opening narration, but I felt it was bring out a little too much, too early, and starting with the "It was summer" paragraph keeps me with enough mystery to keep wanting to know more! :)

Your spelling, grammar and punctuation all seem good to me. There were a couple of dropped apostrophes and one line where I would have put a comma: "Cane said, being forcibly polite." I also, if it were my fic, would have put "U ok?" in italics to make it clearer to dummies like me that it's the content of the note :)

The dealing with the Mayan calendar and the theory that it was unfinished is really clever, I think.

"No animal likes to be caged for long." Creepy and well done. In fact, I think all your dialogue is good.

"Met my frightened gaze" read oddly to me, because I think that's something your narrator would be unlikely to say about herself. She can't see her gaze, unless there's a mirror handy, and it seems to me to be more the sort of thing someone else would say about her.

Great last line. "Oh, shit" is a bit of an understatement, but given your protagonist, it works for me. Well done!