I love the start to this - having spent a few years absent from fanfiction I've been reading on here again and am absolutely glad I came back and found this! However I now want to know what happens in the rest of this story!

Your writing is really good and I was hooked from the start! If there's ever another update I'll be sure to read it :-)

I'm not sure whether I like this story yet, although it's definitely well written, but PLZ DONT leave me hanging or I will explode :Z

Good work! Please keep going :)

Nooooooo :'(. I can't image her with her hair so short or ever being so boring...or abandoning Ingo and Faro

JUST GO FLIPPIN JUMP INTO THE WATER ALREADY :D

This is amazing! When are you going to do more? You really should become an author because I felt like I was reading a professional book by Helen Dunmore herself!

What's next

I freaking love this! Can't wait for the next chapter!

NICE DUDE I loved it and I'm gonna write a fan fic bout Sapphire trewhella choosing to go ounder and join the mer.

Who is "you" I mean, I think I know who it is but...

I WANT TO KNOW !

AH OMG PLSSS UPDATE SOON

awesome can't wait for sapphire and faro reunion please update soon

Ouch, my heart.
This whole story is so painful, but I desperately want to know what's happening! :)
More as soon as you're ready and able would be lovely *big, hopeful eyes*

OMG THIS WAS AMAZING! I really hope that's Faro!

I love this story! It's so good :)

ahhhhhhhhhh! I'm so excited for the next chapter now! And i need to know what happened to make her deny the Mer. Why is she so scared of Ingo now?