That little glimpse of River was very good for Ten. He got to see her alive again, and enjoying herself with what he realized was his future self. I believe that he was broken at the end of the Library arc, and this was a bit of help. Wonderful story!

Ahhh, this was fantastic! A very nice treat to read over my morning coffee, it had me giggling all the way through. Donna Noble is one of my favorite companions, and I LOVE her dynamic with Ten. You capture the both of them perfectly, and I especially can’t help but hear Donna’s voice in my head whenever she comes into your stories.
And the added bonus of Eleven and River running around being themsleves in the background was so great! Thanks so much for righting this fun, fluffy little fic!

This was really, really good! Some sentences could stand a bit of tightening up - words are precious, and the more succinct phrasing is, the better - but overall this is a fabulous piece, with excellent characterization. Molto bene!

Best. Ever.

LOL, this is hilarious. Eleven shouldn't be allowed in public...

Oh my god, I love it XD

Ha!

I really enjoy this little one shot with 10 and Donna inadvertently running into 11 and River. I love the dynamic between both pairs and I think your characterization is really spot-on. Great job!

Best mate and sexiest wife in the same fic? Can't get better than that.

I loved this so much, what a beautiful little story. Brilliant!

Lol I had a feeling it was 11!

Oh my God I thought I reviewed!

This was incredible! I really wanna know what's going through Eleven and River's heads as their running around. Maybe you could post a chapter in their POV? Pretty please with Jammy Dodgers on top?

i love river and donna, thanks!

oh that was too adorable.
poor Ten :'D

This is brilliant. YOU are brilliant. This story was a wonderful read—everyone was very much in character and I loved the "cleanup on aisle 11" bit towards the end. Thanks for bringing a smile to my face.