I don’t think Remus would smile at the idea that his former friend being tortured, even with their complicated history. He would be serious and nod his head. It’s Bellatrix he would smile at more, as Sirius will be dead by six months. This needs updating and you’re doing alright. Some misspelling, but nothing that can’t be fixed or changed.

this story is totally brilliant

I like how this story goes even if you mesh a little of this in the new because I like the new too

Love the story btw

Please don't name the child Priscilla or crueala de veil

I know this story was written a long time ago and is complete so reviewing won't change anything but I need to get my complaints off my chest. I feel this is rushed and the characters are not well developed. Harry potter is sent in The United Kingdom, we don't have Kraft mac'n'cheese, for a British reader this ruins my immersion a bit. I had to look up what tubal pregnancy was, we call it an ectopic pregnancy generally. Despite the faults, I'll probably read to the end. It is interesting if not immersive.

Great Story I loved it

Such a beautiful and wonderful ending. I absolutely loved this story!

Just needed to say that I kept singing in my mind along with them both. "Point of no return" is so full of hidden passion and love, perfect for the relationship between these two.

I have just started this story and I have to say I love it! Will probably finish it within a few days as it is addictive!

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Should have been triplets (has the magical world even seen triplets before? Ooh! Maybe should have been quads)

Started this story and liked the entire idea. Unfortunately, I did find the story lacking in continuity and cohesion. After reading a few of the reviews, I realized that you are doing a rewrite. I think this story could really use it. You have a good thing going, but it definitely needs more polish and editing.

I have made the decision to stop reading now and wait for the rewrite before I delve into the rest of the story. It pains me to stop so soon in the story, but I want to read the best you have to offer. Good luck and I can't wait to read the new story :-)

Awesome story, took most of my day to read it. I really liked and glad the Snape family won out in the end!

I just cannot understand why she have to marry him. If she could go ti the burrow and wherever she wants she just could go to Hogwart and the Order could hide her...