Oh, Merlin merciful, I love this.
Too. Damn. Much.

If there is such a thing.

IT'S WONDERFUL AND HEARTBREAKING AND DEEP AND AMAZING AND PURRRFECT :3

...I don't ship Red Cricket, but Effiemitch is my HG OTP...so I'll take a free guess and say it'd be awesome even with them ;)

LOVE IT :3

hervisssa :)

Love it!
:)

This is a sweet story well done :)

Ooooh. Another one of your OUAT stories! :D
I love how their story in Storybrooke is a total mirror of the one in the Enchanted Forest. Great job.
Nooo! He leaves her there! No! Bad Rumpel. Bad Rumpel. Go back there right now and... and... :'(
Her life... it's so sad. At least he's shaping up and helping her now.
Yes! Proper kisses! So much better than almost-kisses. :D
I love this. It's sweet and angsty, but nice all the same. :D Be proud of yourself: I pretty much never read one-shots and you've gotten me to read two!
Thank you,
esin of sardis

For all of the different bits and pieces that made up this fic, it really came together well at the end.

I almost didn't read this, but I'd just listened to the A Team for the billionth time an hour ago and It's stuck in my head, so seeing it here kinda shocked the bejesus outta me. And man, am I glad I did read this. It's a unique take on the story and your writing's fantastic.

pretty little thing.
The end is really excellent.

I liked it! I felt that the ending made perfect sense with how the narrative was going!

The first time I heard this song I immediately thought of Rumbelle! I'm so happy you wrote this! Well done! :)

This was completely lovely! I liked that you showed Mr. Gold not always doing the right thing (such as leaving her out in the cold)-I can totally picture him doing that and feeling like a coward for it. I'm glad they got their sort of happy ending.

Sad but nice too. I enjoyed it.

This was absolutely beautiful in every regard. I loved it-it held me captivated the entire time. Bravo, dearie! (-;