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I totally wish there was more! This was one of the best Buffy/Faith ships I've seen so far.

I've read this many times. Still one of my favorites. Always will be. Thank you.

Typical story for a newbie and nothing that doesn't exist a million times over. Faith's in love, Buffy's unaware, Faith blows up and sulks then Buffy becomes aware and goes to Faith to proclaim her undying, closeted affection and immediately gives it up. Just like many other stories I've read where Buffy and Faith have a first time, they both are out of character for an actual first time after a drama-filled supposed misunderstanding. "I didn't know you loved me but now I do and I love you too, so now let's have mind-blowing, like we've done it a million times sex." This started off kind of decent although Faith's reactions were way to out of control and combative considering Buffy was a clueless twit, so Faith can't really fault her for that.

My advice would be to read every piece of Buffy and Faith fanfic you can find, then get a beta or a go to person that can stir you away from the repetitiveness that comes with an older fandom. Good point is that you actually can string sentences together.

I declare the hat-trick: sweet, hot and well-written. Hope you continue writing stuff.

Great, I liked it! Thanks and I hope you write another fuffy.

The Faith-sexual line made me laugh a little bit there lol

And hot damn, girl, here I was supposed to go for a nap and decided to read this before I went and well, lets just say someone ain't napping anytime soon ;)

Loved it. Different than other fics I've read (and I don't read a whole lot of them anymore) but a good different. Cannot wait to see what other stories you come up with :)

Wow... That was beautiful... And intense. I really liked it. Well characterized, it was just like seeing them saying those things.
Good fic.
Thanks for writing this story. I hope you write another one.

Very well written! You deserve more reviews.

wow awesome first really good

Nice first effort!
Got a good build up.. Please keep it going :)

Congratulations on posting your first Fuffy fic!

Right from the start it had me amused - the setting, the conversation, the guy Buffy picked out, Faith's irritation, Buffy's defensiveness: "It's not like you've given me any requirements to follow!". Then everything sort of snowballs out of control with Faith being too sensitive, Buffy being too insensitive, and BAM! cue the full-blown angst. Really good start and I'm looking forward to seeing how everything goes from here.

great start, looking forward to more