Yay there is part 2 awesome

This story was sooo cute pretty rushed wish it lasted a bit longer but still good none the less

Wow didn’t expect that

That went by quick.

Frankly I think the story is pretty cute.
My only question is when the f*#& they have sex? I won't judge to much considering I'm not a writer. But really when did it happen? They whole she's pregnant thing kinda seems like it was was just tossed in there at the last min. But still over all the story is cute.

oohh this is good ! i like how it went into Mori's family life a little bit xxxxD and WOW VIC MIGNOGNA RESPONDED TO YOUR EMAIL?! THAT'S A-MAZ-ING! [insert 5,000,000,000,000 exclamation points here]

I don't mean to come off as a jerk but I had a really hard time following this story. I kind of got the impression that she had died due to your blatant lack of explaining. Please do not take this the wrong way but I believe you have some work to do if you ever want to make a better story..

This story is written so horribly bad that I won't even continue reading it for the sake of literature...

Alrighty then! Tell me when ya get the sequel up!

:O AMAZING! I loved this story. Are you... I dunno... thinking 'bout a sequel? *jumps up and down excitedly*

After awhile I usually get tired with stories, but this one is too interesting to! Thanks for uploading, and good luck!

blah sorry the others were great but the last 2 sucked badly.

Oh no! Poor haruhi.

i read all nine chapters so far and i love it its just ... satoshi is so nice in the manga hes like a mini huni but either way still love it keep up the good work you just earned yourself a fan byee

dont know how well you take to someone giving suggestion but i have several ideas that should play out really well for you if your open to them so far its is really good cant wait for the next chapter