It would be nice if you continued this story.

for some reason i want Fiore and Naruto to be together because they both want to be Hpkage and thats what started Minato and Kushina's relationship, but hey its your story and i love all of the story's you have wrote. I'm just saying it would be cool for you to pair Naruto up with her you already have no problum killing characters like how you killed Gai in your other story and if you were to kill Hinata that would put Naruto in a pit of depretion and could be taken out of it by Fiore, like Nia did for Simon in Gurren Lagann, but hey its your story and you decide not a reader like me, but if my vont means anythimg then ya, also i see what might be mistaken as a foreshadow to Sasuke and Fiore being a pair but again not my story.

I hate to be that guy, but did you check the math when adding up the years? It starts with Naruto and Sasuke as infants, then five years later when they are like brothers, tow years later and they are mourning at what would he age seven, then three years later and they are thirteen.

I must say, Sakura is ANNOYING. Like how canon Sasuke perceived her ANNOYING. everything else is perfect though

Loved it!

Keep up the good work!

Yay, funny chapter! I like this story though not as much as The Wanderers, but I credit that to the length differences. I don't really have a whole lot to say about it because it still feels like it's getting off the ground. If you do want a specific opinion about something just PM me if you want. Overall, very good chapter. I look forward to the next one.

Please continue soon. ;)

As I expected, it left me craving another chapter. The way you create relationships between characters and the subtle effects of those relationships never cease to amaze me. I enjoy the less serious aspect of it mainly because most of the stories I read are heavily fighting intensive and NaruHina crazy oriented. I look forward to the repercussions of copying the forbidden scroll and Sasuke's experiences with his new summoning contract. I think it'd be a good idea to work on incorporating clique like things into this where certain characters are just naturally with others, like how Naruto and Sasuke are. The way no one knows Naruto has the fox in him was also good, most Naruto stories almost always go off of Naruto being hated and shunned and that it shapes into something different in each story. I also enjoyed your way of making Itachi a good guy, I never liked seeing him as a bad guy. All in all, good story. I look forward to this one as much as The Wanderers now.

I H-A-T-E my brother (i do wish he DIED) inshallah! AMEN!

I like this so far

Awesome...I can't wait to see how this all pans out:)

Nice job, m'friend! This will likely be good!

Keep it up!

that was really good i laughed my ass off at some points,loooking forward to the next chapter, keep up to good work :)