some issues here and there. good basis for a story rather then rp. it was good

really liked it! there are a few spots that need work but overall nicely done :)

Karkat: Smack a Bitch

If Karkat ever had a censor on him (one of the ones that bleep the swears out) I swear, his whole sentence would be one steady beep. :)

its...confusing

Wow. Just wow in a totally awesome way. This is really good if you plan on making a part 2 let me know