I LOVED the story I'm not sure I'll read the rewrite but I LOVE this plot

By all means: the traduction in french doesn’t work, but you could say “bien sûr”. It’s can of the same thing. We do not say by all means in french, a least in French Canada.

La traduction en français ne fonctionne pas, mais tu pourrais direbien sûr ». C’est plus ou moins la même chose. Nous en disons pas ça dans le Canada français.

i thought it was three hours

Great start, this story seems interesting. A couple of errors caught my eye: when the recruits scramble for the flag pole, I think the word "converged" might be a better saying is "brains beats brawn." You also confused "waist" where it should be "waste." That's all, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I want to write with the characters for captain America 2 and Thor 2-3 and avengers 2 please! My email is

This version not the rewrite

Can you give me the story to continue writing it please?

For the first French conversation, you should have said "Puis-je me joindre à vous ?je vous en prie", it would have been more correct. otherwise great story so far

Oh look, the police are here.' I mused before Victor blew one of them up, 'Their probably gonna that part, laughed until I almost had tears.

"Brains beat brawns" is the correct terminology

Hey so I'm reading ur story, obviously, and I rly like it! But u know I'm german and those conversations aren't right... I don't know if u want to change it or not but if u do I'm happy to help

Is there gonna be a sequel? Like the winter soldier would be cool.

No offense, but it's basic biology that girls and boys can't be identical twins. They can only be fraternal, if they were identical, they'd have the same gender. The only were you can fertilise twins to be different genders is by two separate eggs being ovulated, which is fraternal. So Eleanor doesn't have to keep on why explaining that her and Jimmy are non identical because that's the only thing they can be. Unless, of course, Jimmy was transgender. But great story nonetheless.

Guten tag is good day

Hi, look I know you finished this one ages ago, but I was wondering if you would ever update it and like add in meeting Sam and Bucky and Wanda, Peitro, Vision and everyone else? Cause that would be awesome, both in seeing her reaction of knowing that Bucky is alive and how she would deal with it and stuff. Also her view on the Peace accords and stuff. I mean she will obviously be biased toward Steve but what would she actually think? So if you ever continue this, I would be overjoyed to read it. I am, as a matter of fact, reading your Immortal Coil right now, and I love it and this.