beautiful amazing story

You did an amazing job! Almost brought me to tears:(

my god this was amazing :o i'm practically in shock, incredible work!

Beeeaautttiful. Every single word and concept was conveyed extraordinarily, and every single emotion and feeling of love, anger, rage, and hurt was channelled perfectly through your linguistic repertoire. I love this story.

So cute and realistic! I love this!

Beautiful.

That was amazing!

I'm swelling with tears
I don't like crying because I feel to sappy but, this wasn't to bad of a reason
Good job and keep it up

This is so beautiful

You. Made. Me. Cry that in itself is a reward I don't cry I just don't buy yet I'm blubbering thank you just thank you

i love this story but I prefer Zatanna/Richard

What happened to Richard and Conner? are they alive? by the way this story is very touching. :)

Could you by chance direct me to more magnificent stories like this? I am in the need for more. You did a fantastic job, really pulling at my own emotions along the way. Could not put this down. Absolutely loved it! :D

omg! I can't stop crying i love this story i cry like you have no idea :') i just this is soooo wonderful i love it

I only have three words for this. I Love It. Please update storys about these more. It was beautiful and well writen. It made me cry. I just love it.

I think this is the third or fourth time I have clicked favorite for this story. Everytime I read it I cry. I hate it, but I love it.