| Reviews for Fractured Heart |
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   adores.dylan chapter 1 . 10/1/2019 This would be a wonderful story if you made a few key changes to this chapter! It was awesome! Thanks |
| ObsidianDraconis chapter 1 . 5/17/2019 As heartbreaking as this is, because I love Paul/Bella as much as I love Jasper/Bella, I like how you made the imprint happen that way. It had to kill Embry to sit back and watch but I always thought it was silly that the imprints always (with two exceptions of course) turned into something romantic. Jake tells Bella he’ll be whatever his imprint needs, what if she never needs him in that way? What if she always needs him platonically? This turned out romantic of course, but showing it could have been something else was a nice touch. |
| rachel625 chapter 1 . 11/26/2018 This was soooo good! I knew he had imprinted on her! With being able to find her so easily and having to correct himself when saying the 'pack' was so concerned. and then when his wolf want to keep marking her! such a great story! |
| lmmiller93 chapter 1 . 10/23/2018 OMG! This was amazing! I love the pairing and would love to see a continuation. It'd be great to see the pack's reaction. Happy writing :) |
| mowmers chapter 1 . 9/26/2017 Where is the poem from the beginning of this fic from? |
| NegansGirl2020 chapter 1 . 6/22/2017 was good but would of liked it to be longer |
| 1WhoLoves2ReadAlot chapter 1 . 1/28/2016 Awesome story, so far! Love it |
| TinaF chapter 1 . 9/27/2015 Fantastic story! |
| rochelleross56 chapter 1 . 8/29/2015 This is a great story so intense and you did a great job... Bella was looking for something and found more so much more... Awww embry he was so sweet... |
| Inlovewithjazz chapter 1 . 5/25/2015 I love Embry! Such a sweet heart! (-: |
| SagaDevotee chapter 1 . 10/14/2014 wow. perfect. |
| Jasper's Darlin' Kathy chapter 1 . 10/2/2014 Wow! You nailed the prompt. Awesome fic, I loved it! |
| Bell 1 chapter 1 . 3/31/2014 *breathy* WHOA! I knew it would be an Embry/Bella story, but realizing she dated Paul and then he imprinted, I figured Embry imprinted on her after that. However, whoa, I've always enjoyed Embry/Bella stories (there are so few of them), but this one pretty much takes the cake. His patience, his devotion, his love for her, the way he let her be happy, even though it was with another... all of that is just simply amazing! You did very well with that prompt challenge! VERY WELL! Thank you! :D |
| paulandsethlover69 chapter 1 . 12/30/2013 I cry...but loved it |
| Robin.D chapter 1 . 10/29/2013 that was good i liked it :):):):) |
