nice use of detail in this story.

I like these. Are they, perhaps, the first of a series? (I know, I know. Nothing but gripes and questions. Nevertheless, I like a longerish story where relationships and character can be explored and expanded upon, and this just BEGS for that treatment!)

AWWWWW! i love it!

I liked this one-shot and how well it connected with the other story. It was creatively done. Great job! :)

Three cheers for inbox alerts, woo! :D

I see what you did there. This is Raven's day. :) I really like the way you picked a valued item from each to put in their dreams: for BB, it was his favorite hoodie, and for Raven, it was a murder-mystery book. Very creative. I am kind of curious as to what type of business Trigon runs, but it's probably just because I tend to think more about the mundane details of a story than what is actually happening...

If there's any skipped letters in this review, please ignore them. My DS keyboard is refusing to listen to me nicely. :(

Anyways, great oneshot! Ever considered expanding these two, or will they stay as regular oneshots?

Not bad, not bad. How ya been? :) I like how you wrote the relation between Raven and her dreams. Keep rockin

i loved it its good :D

That was cute!
Great job Har;)
-Rhett