Well fucking hell... those nightmares about Miles and Richards... Fucking Richards and that dream with Charlie as well... and I thought the 3rd part was intense. Damnit to hell though, I wish Charlie didn't have to go so crazy but I love Miles again for the roses and kiss to the forehead. Poor Danny... ugh... Charlie you need to calm down! I like the head-football thing. xD

Poor Charlie and Danny they are tortured so much. Charlie needs to stop imaging creepy things.

(I listened to Rennie Foster - Devil's water while I read this, and it gave it a very specific ... air. Just letting you know.)

I really liked this. I don't feel a lot for Charlie in the show, but it was interesting reading this from her point of view. I really don't like the nickname Danny's gotten ... but in a way, I think he'll live up to it. Danny does everything. Yeah, he will. He'll bring the whole Republic DOWN.

I like it-It's really good.

Charlie is more interesting in your story than she is on the show! I like her.

Poor Danny. He has no luck afterall. *sigh* "Danny does-anything..." It's really bad I do think Danny needs some love and hugs. He is suffering alot on your oneshots.

Wow! I'm liking the new Charlie! :D And the Richards' head as a soccer ball was a great way to show how tough she's gotten since she's become leader of the rebels. Now go save Danny, Charlie! He needs you! I liked her reaction to hearing Miles went to go see Danny. :) I never suspected it was he. Great story! I'm looking forward to more in the series.

*cries a thousand tears* poor Charlie and Danny. They just can't catch a break. I really enjoyed reading this, especially seeing how the different characters were interacting with Charlie and with Danny. Even though I feel bad for them I really want more from this universe you've created. And thanks Captain Neville for giving Charlie an improvised soccer ball :D

I'm just gonna go curl up in a corner and cry now. Right in the feels IA, right in the feels.

Damn, girl. Why is poor Danny always getting raped? Maybe I need to take him away from you for a little while...

Feeling sorry for Charlie, too. *huggles her*

I'm just curious though, why *is* Danny always getting raped? I mean, that seems to be a running theme for the poor guy. Makes for a powerful story and all, though.

One quibble: "Charlie remember"- "remember" should be "remembers".

Other that that, another great piece!

-Orwell