I'm actually impressed. I think it's a cute story. :)

For people aka Americans who use Fahrenheit that's 113 degrees

OMG!

I really loved this :D

That was interesting, a bit different from the usual spamano fics, and i have to say I liked it. Well done :3

The idea for the story in the summary really caught me. (Or I want an excuse out of homework) I think it could be written better with more details, but it's still great. What I mean by that is it could focus more on the general change of feelings for Romano. If he tried to act on it before, and then Spain did something stupid not knowing. (All it really needed was to focus more on Spain's obliviousness in general I guess) Sometimes we need a break from overly tsundere Romano for some nice, honest, First person narration by him.

Plus, since they aren't brothers, he raised him though-it would fit if Romano concluded that small coversation with,

"We're not related anyway, stupid."
"err- right."

The kissing all over the face didn't fit right in my opinion. If Spain just kept smooching him on the mouth all hard like an obsessive mother on the floor, that would of fit best I thought.

The last sentence isn't very strong, it could've ended better with them sitting up, and Romano saying, "How long bastard?"
And Spain answering, "Oh, mi little tomate, I have so much tell you!"

Lull Lull Lull. I still loved it. I hope you don't mind my criticism. :)

Aww, it was so cute and sweet ! Great story! So fluffy... such a great bed-time story :p. Now I'm going to have real good dreams ;D.
You hate the sun and your father insists you're not albino? SAME HERE xD!
Anyway, great story ;)

AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWW *dies from cuteness*

Awwwwww. This was cute! And u could play twister that's what me and my friends do when were bored but I'm Italian so I'm easily entertained!

Um... Go swimming? :D

Oh my god this was adorable. I can't help but just sit here giggling to myself because I'm so overwhelmed by the cuteness of this story. I love the way you wrote it, and the way you wront Spain and Romano, and their relationship, and the whole thing with the kisses, it was just. So fluffy and cute. Awesome job, and keep writing!

Ally

That was cute!