I love the story and that sexy chuckle

Ahahahahaha omg, the last sentence! I'm crying of laughter. lmao
That was amazing and very funny

Good story.

I started screaming "That's my Boy , Nico. That's my boy".

WOW! JUST WOW! *Nosebleed*

I KNEW IT! THAT SNEAKY BASTARD KNEW ENGLISH ALL ALONG!

I love this story, I hope to see more from you that are as good as this one. Keep up the great work.

Omg this is amazing. Please don't tell me this is the end, I need more!

I like how this turn from a hot one-shot to having an extra chapter that is romantic

Can u make another chap where Percy meets the family? The whole thantos and scary men was funny

Fucking sexy Italians and their sexiness... Damn you Nico.

this was a good chapter. it seems like you could do more with this maybe. but it was a very nice story. though im wondering what Jason ment by his little threat to Nico. i dont know where you could go with this if you continue it more. you could make more chapters where they hangout and go on dates and their relationship grows further together. you could probably make it where Percy meets Nico's family and stuff. maybe Percy joins Nico's family or something. but its up to you. as you already stated in other author notes you were not look at this to be a mutli chapter story and you dont know where to go even if you do do a fourth chapter. but it didnt look like you had any errors or had things worded where they were confusing. though maybe you should have still done the whole Italian translation at the end of the chapter because there were a few that were ones i didnt know and you didnt have a translation at the end but i got it with using google translator. though it was shocking to see that you had Percy do what he did on the gondala ride and stuff, i would have never in my life thought of that. maybe thats because im the type of person to make things like these where they are privete and slightly acward at the beinging because they are nervice and scared and stuff at first but also make it seem like its steamy and romantic but still have a inicent look on it. but once it starts it build up to where its just romantic and steamy from what some of my readers say if their not bashing me for my writting and how i go with things on here because its different then what most people do. though my stories are not of this series you should check them out and tell me what you think.

Why does the good stuff got to end?!

This was quite an enjoyable fanfiction! Love Nico and his sexy Italian ways... ;P

despite the fact that thing move REALLY quickly, it was nice to read.
I would have preferred it in longer chap, but in the end it was interesting.
thanks for sharing