Nice writing style, good constructed story, staying true to the original while blending it with your own characters without it getting cluttered. I'm glad this one isn't too short because I'm enjoying every minute reading it :)

that was cute but,on the ice ship he didn't seem too upset about clementine and more historical on catching the armadillo but otherwise it was pretty good

Omg who do they meet?

Great story

I looked at your profile. You have such in-depth descriptions about your characters! Now it is time for me to go read your other stories.

On to the next one!

PS. I have barely even started LTP, and I still need to read the one about the sun and awkward moments!

Oooh, so there are more on your profile? Cool! I'll have to check 'em out! ;)

What a beautiful story! X)

Oh boy, I think everybody who's seen the movie knows what's going to happen to Gut and his crew from this point onward. O_o

Wow, Clem makes a near-full recovery...and that's what she gets to hear first thing in the morning.

(blows nose into a tissue noisely) Oh, I love when romances finally come together!

X)...Buck...crazy? Oh, those two boys don't even know the half of that truth!

Wow, an original song-you're the first author I've ever noticed to have done that.

"But not lucky enough..." Those words...:(

I'm really starting to love your OCs here. Not romantically, of course, but in terms of their personalities...especially Argeth and Clem...

finaly Squint gets the a girlfriend! love the story!, mabey you could write a sequal... like mabey one about Squint and Clemontine's kids or what happend that night when she became pregment... sory if i sound like a pervert but i am just a absessed fan write noun that has a big crush on Squint!