This was a pretty good read.. I thoroughly enjoyed it.. good job!

Absolutely GREAT story!

I had to revisit this story. Thank you for a great story.

If that was the ending by god it was abrupt.

Good story, wavered between being a bit long winded and not long enough at times but nothing too bad. The interludes were very well done.

Loghain/Cousland WTF that is wrong and disturbing on so meny levels.

Well, that was rather...anti-climatic.

Ding-dong the Arl is dead! Yeah! It was about time, too. I've been waiting for the other shoe to drop ever since he attacked poor Nesiara...

:) Nice to see the young'uns all grown up and carrying on.

7'10-Man, what have been feeding Harvest? Or it really was the result of what happened with the Dragon.

Nice that they stopped another invasion, and good that everyone seems to be getting along. A very nice story overall.

A good slogan for anyone. Really, if you get massed mages behind you, an Exalted March is no problem. They've never succeeded with Tevinter, and there's no reason they would suceed with Ferelden.

So it's really over! A happy ending. and a better world.

This story is awesome too! Looking forward to an update! :D

Dammit, Ferelden! JUST LET THE POOR MAN BE A GRANDPA! He's earned it!

Poor Alistair. He just gets no respect.

Oh, my goodness... Yes, I could sort of see that coming. Maric just has to keep saying "no." However, there's no doubt that all sorts of people will go behind Alistair's back to Maric if they don't like something.

dangerous political times ahead xxx