This was definitely a fun read!
I do think Soul deserved more of a punishment for being such a jerk to Maka, but I suppose I'm not as forgiving. Maybe a few more Maka Chops. XD
Thank you!

Absolutely loved the story! Fantastic premis and character weaving!

I absolutely loved it! C: Good job

Speechless...absolutely speechless

Have you ever thought of becoming an author? Cause this has captivated me from the start!

This is really great. I am quite intrigued on what your doing and love the way the story is going. I feel like your actually capturing the characters into the story...keep up the good work!

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!

Rumors not roomers.
Still a good story.

You kept putting awe instead of aware.
Like the chappie though.

I have been a fan of Soul Eater for several years now, and still have not come to a conclusion about Crona's gender. (I can't seem to make up my mind, sometimes Crona's a boy, sometimes a girl, on occasion both, and usually neither) One thing is for sure though, I simply can't think of Crona as any sort of sexualized creature whatsoever. Also, half way through this chapter I suddenly realized that there has been no sight of Stein for 14 chapters, and I don't know what's worse. That you haven't included Stein, or that I didn't even notice he was gone.

Uhg, I just can't. This story has so much potential but I keep nitpickgn details that I don't like. :/ For example, who hasn't tasted mint before? Almost every toothpaste on the market is peppermint or spearmint flavored.. aside from the awful cinnamon flavored toothpaste. Maka is just way too out of character. Way too submissive, uneducated and not-adorably-stubborn enough. But that's okay, because I can see you're trying to get her character figured out.. as you write. :/ It seems like the whole story wasn't thought out well enough before you started writing? Random details that aren't explained enough (The cocky woman with the ringlets. Not once does it mention a name or soemthing better to identify her so I had to reread the entire dinner section three times to figure out what was going on, who was talking to whom and such because the scene wasn't laid out well enough for me to imagine). But, sudden details about retelling legends that captivate young and old? Clearing up obvious misunderstandings with Poppy/Lilly and payment? :/ It's just... I don't know. you're terrific at writing and creating scenes in one area (The first time Soul and Maka met and she snapped at him), but just..unorganized and hard to follow with the rest. I DO think you have heaps and heaps of promise though, so please don't think my comment is meant as harsh criticism. I imagine you're a young, young writer and if that's the case I know if you keep writing and story building that you'll be a wonderful writer in the future. c: But I can't read this any farther because of how picky I am, I guess.

wonderful hope you keep it up

Thank You Thank UpYou Thank You so much! 3 3

Why is Crona evil?:,(

Loved the ending, hopefully there will be a part two. The ending with both Black Star and Tsubaki being invited to the academy seemed like the perfect set up for a sequel. I hope to read more of your stories : )