A good tip i always use when writing is write the beginning then the ending then the middle. That way your excitement is still there but you can take whatever time you need to reinforce characters and make the story whatever length you want. Cute piece. I really enjoyed it :-)

No, i think that you got Gajeel just right.
when i read the last part i was like 'Aww that soooo,sweet!'
Post more soon, ciao!

(0o0) GEEEZ! This is AMAZING! I love it! Remind me to thank Brittany next time I see her for convincing you to write this! Honestly, I love it! Your writing style is perfect for this story! I have to go creep your other stories now... (0o0)

So cute! And Gajeel has a very layered character, one minute he's cold & blunt, the next he's crying over his cat, the next he's playing a guitar & singing in a white suit, this story just picks out his cuter side )

This is sooo cuuute! :3 I totally can see Gajeel having these reactions, so don't worry of being out of character ;)

That was SOO CUTE *_* loooove it :D

I found this through your post on tumblr. I like this very much...So cute! _

Write more GaLe like this awesomeness in the future! :)