Ok...That just happend

I really enjoyed reading this. I hope you can really update soon, but now let's just talk about the story. I've noticed some spelling and grammar errors, which kind of annoyed me. I really liked how nice Shadow was to Sonic. You should keep it that way because it's probably the only fan fiction like that. But Shadow and Blaze DO need stronger personalitys. I mean they were okay but they can't be all " hehe I got kissed and now i'm blushing. They were pretty good most of the story though. Keep up the good work. I'm expecting an uptate soon. Remember this is your fanfic and no one can tell you what to write. Despite these errors , this is still my favorite fanfic.

Okay, it was poorly written but it has it's charms. Interesting to say the least. It's like a high school drama mix with something from sonic x.

I love it!
Shadaze is my favorite couple! Going GREAT so far!

very interesting story. i have a question. how can you create your own story i cant figure it out.

Nice story but i think there could have been some more depth in the words and it got kindof anyoing with all the *sits on couch* *opens door* *kisses* plus you made Shadow really really nice i'v sometimes wanted to see that side of him but he was a little too nice like calling sonic his brother... never could picher that or crying or huging... no offens but this is waaaay out of his caricter i rate this 5/10 plus there was some lemon in it.

Oh god no...no no no no no no please no.
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I have been wanting one of these stories for years. YEARS! A fight between Blaze and Amy for Shadow, along with a Sonic Vs Shadow for Amy! And it's finally here...
And it's all wrong for just two reasons:

1: Chat/Script Format: In the guidelines section, it is explicitly stated that Chat/Script Interactive format can not be used on this site! I will not report a story for that, but others that I know very well would. IF this story is reported, you do realize what will happen, do you? It will more then likely be removed.

2: The personalities...they are much closer then other stories I have seen. However, Shadow and Blaze, both strong and independent characters, have been reduced to blushing teenagers. Sonic is good enough, almost Great. Amy is good. But Shadow's OOCness and Blaze's OOCness will drive readers away terribly fast. There are quite a few stories on this site centered around Shadow that I would recommend you read, as to get a feel for his persona. For Blaze, I haven't found many at all, and I've not yet been able to take the time and look. I would, however, recommend studying the Archie comics that deal with Blaze, as they give a wonderful narrative of Blaze that is more detailed then the games, console or handheld, have ever been. You can find Archie Comic info from the Mobius Encyclopedia wiki.

On a side note, I didn't delve heavily into the grammar/spelling, but there is smeothing that made me laugh close to the opening of this chapter:
...we have been dating for 3 mouths and things were going great.
Date for one mouth, then date for another mouth...how do you date for a mouth anyways?

If you want to contact me, feel very free to PM me. This story has SO MUCH inspiration, and I don't want it to go to waste!