Reviews for Strawberries & Shawarma Coda: Motrin
Stardiouses chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
That was a really good fic :)
Onychinus chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Wow, great fic! I especially love Pepper in this! Keep it up :)
thedoctorandriver chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
I'm not joking, this actually made me cry.
Long live all Pepperony fans!
Anyway as you can probably tell I loved this one shot - and the same goes for the story it's based on. :)
elllaria chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Awww, cute! I LOVE LOVE LOVE Pepperony!
queen-sheep chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Very adorable :)

I loved it!
Galatians 5.16 chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Stay.

Yeah, I like that.
TheLastRider chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Awwww...

That was wonderful. Fluff, yes, but wonderful, delicious fluff- like cotton candy.
But definitely not strawberry flavored.
dancingthrough chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Awwwww fits perfectly with the story line :-)
kkann chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Mother of god I just can’t, okay? I mean I just—you people. Like I really don’t know how to deal with this, I really don’t. I am just so done.
I know it might sound a bit too much like a broken record if I just keep repeating it, but: thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you. I can’t. I don’t know how.

I will have you know that the first time I read this I almost cried, okay, I really did. I mean I was going to but then my roommate was there and I didn’t want her giving weirder looks than she normally does. Either way, I don’t think you have idea what this means to me. I don’t care that it’s ‘late,’ or that you think it’s ‘way too short and really rubbish,’ because shut up no it isn’t. It’s perfect, okay? It’s just perfect and my feelings are everyone. Seriously, it’s a complete mess everywhere and I don’t know how I’m going to explain this to people.

But do you understand what this means to me? I don’t really know if you do, and I don’t know if my first response was any indication, but I made some sort of high-pitched, inhuman noise when I saw your note. Because not only did you write something for foolish ME, but you wrote something based off of something I did. I didn’t even think that was possible and spent the duration of the story alternating between squealing and trying not to cry.

And then I got to the end and I didn’t even know what to do. Because I wanted to read more but I can’t but I want to. This is why you need to write everything else ever and I can sit in my corner and cry because my feels are under attack but I wouldn’t have it any other way.

Okay, this is getting a bit long but I really hope that I’ve gotten my point across. I am so thankful that I have you in my life, you know that? You should. You know now. And then to top that off you just stick a bunch of Pepperony feelings and the other Avengers in my face and I don’t even know what to do anymore. (Like you’re shouting ‘LOOK AT WHAT YOU’VE DONE’ and all I can do in response is make whale noises. Which I still am every time I read this.)

I guess what I really want to say is…thank you. Thank you, you are wonderful and fantastic and brilliant and please, please, for the love of everything that is decent and the Avengers and the Doctor, please keeping writing. You need to keep writing and being amazing “or you could just … stay.”

See what I did there? And I meant every word.
Mandriel chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
Aww, :3
The Beckster chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Faving this twice in two places because I can because I love all these feels too much to be healthy!

Still torn between melting from fluff and crying from feels.

I can't deal with all these Pepperony feels,I'm just gonna go numb myself with some Slogyn until I fall asleep.

This review has nothing intelligent happening in it, I apologize. I used up all my smarts on the dA comment.

-Becks
Red Tigress chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Whoops, I don't know why I didn't see this before, considering how many hours a week I lurk around this place...very nice! I liked it a lot. Love me some pepperony feels, especially when Tony puts her above everything else. Last line was great too. Perf. Well done!
Lyssie212 chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
AKFKSKALDJFJAKFHAKDHSJSDJSKS J;

OH. MY. GOD. I just. and you just. and. just. wat.

I swear, all you wonderful people are going to kill me some day. Because. Feels. Oh god, and I still haven't read the Slogyn fic Becks wrote yet...plus YJ...And Kylie and Kate both supposedly working on Clintasha stuff...Yeah, I'm totally screwed.

BUT OMG MICHELLE THIS WAS JUST AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL AND GAH THE FEEEEELS. ;n; YOU ARE FRAKKING AMAZING. Just sayin. ;)

( .wherethefudgehaveibeenomgiam suchahorribleperson.)
May Eve chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
OH MY GOD YOU EVIL WITCH. This whole thing is sort of sad but mostly kind of adorable and almost funny and then BAM. The end that RIPS OUT MY HEART WHILE IT'S STOPPED BEATING. /runs off to actually read Strawberries now
Susan M. M chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Very nice bit of characterization for Tony.