Is this story dead? It's been interesting reading this thing. And I want to know the outcome of that cult arc.

Interesting update, a lot of good character moments here. This cult also sounds suspicious. I'm also seeing some foreshadowing of a potential Yuki/Yuno conflict, so I'm interested in seeing how that plays out. Keep up the good work. My next chapter should be out soon too.

Cute chapter, I wonder if Minerva will show up in PA and tease Rei about his childhood crush on her... maybe even in front of Freya! That would be fun to see.

Ominous ending too, makes me wonder what's going on. BTW, I updated my fic as well, please read and review it if you have the time, thanks.

please keep writing for this story im having a great time reading and its sooooo good please continue this _

Wow, you're updating this fast! Any chance for some similar updates to PA?

As for the chapter itself, the resolution to the crisis was good, although one thing bothered me. Even if the dart hit her eye, the tranquilizer would still enter her bloodstream, wouldn't it? So why didn't it have any effect?

Interesting to see the PA crossover at the end there, I'm wondering how the characters will interact with each other (if he knew in advance, Rei should be grateful that he'll end up with a more stable girlfriend than Yukiteru will).

Looking forward to the next update.

You posted this update so fast that I didn't realize it at first, I'm glad I checked again because this was a good chapter. I wonder why the phone malfunctioned, though. Also, if Yukiteru knows how to avoid the bombs, couldn't he lead the others to safety? Looking forward to the next update, for both this and PA.

Things just keep getting worse for Yukiteru, don't they? He's just lucky that Yuno hasn't gone completely psycho (yet). I hope Minerva kicks Minene's ass. Looking forward to the next update on this and Platinum Angel.

Nice exposition/plot advancement chapter. The ending was also pretty ominous, keep it up.

You know, I once told webidolchiu94 that attempting a crossover of too many series would inevitably turn into an incoherent mess, but she proved me wrong, and now you're doing the same. I'm counting at least 4 things this is a crossover of, but they all seem to fit together naturally. That's not even mentioning the crossover with your other fic. Also, I'd just like to say that out of your many pairs of persocom twins, Athena and Minerva continue to be the most endearing (perhaps a cameo from them in PA might be a good idea?) Either way, keep up the great work.

More pls!

Awesome chapter, I'm glad thy it follows a different path than the normal future dairy.

I love it, I love the idea and you have done a great job this far. Keep it up.

OMG You have no idea how long I've been waiting for the new chapters. 3 months, at least. So glad you made them.
They're brilliantly written; the introduction of characters, the intense action, everything is great. Keep it up, and hopefully, you'll get those new chapters soon; i'm tired of waiting :P

Holy crap! I thought you were gone! It's been so long since you've updated any of your stories. Needless to say, I'm glad to see you're back. But now for the chapter.

That was an interesting plot twist regarding Hiyama. I have a hint of how our mysterious scarf-wearing friend is going to help him, as well.

Yuno is starting to demonstrate yandere tendencies, I think. I don't see how she's going to manage to take on two combat persocoms, though. I hope Yukiteru gets out of this okay. M

BTW I've updated too, so read and review if you have the time please. Although if you read my newest chapter now, you might be surprised when I post my next one, since it might not continue the way you would expect. Keep up the good work.

"warmth of an arctic wind" was wonderful. I loved that description so, so much.

Looks like...the battle is about to begin.

*puts on sunglasses*