I'd like to see a continuation of this story, Jason finding Charlie.

LOVE Nate and Charlie. Enjoyed seeing what might be going on in his head. I'd love to see you write more about them as a pair!

I don't think Nate/Jason are too split personality at all. I this it is a pretty normal way for someone who works undercover to mentally divide themselves. Nate is obviously a role that Jason plays using the softer parts of himself. I think this fic did an excellent job identifying Jason internal conflict.

If you're taking requests, I'd like to see your take on the first scene between Monroe and Rachel. Actually any scene with Monroe would be awesome! Thanks for sharing!

I love all of your Revolution stories. I've been going through and reading them, although this is my first comment! I promise as you write more I'll comment on all of them! I didn't take Nate/Jason as a split personality, it's the separation between the person he is and the person he wants to become, which I think is what you initially intended.

I like the Nate/Jason personality split. Its believable and not confusing :) I think he might actually be thinking this on the show!

You know what? I absolutely loved this. Jason is completely messed up, that's what makes it all so psychologically delicious. I thought it was really well done. They need to spend more time on the show on Jason and Charlie, it would seriously boost the ratings, especially with them "growing" her up as they've progressively been doing. I thought you captured his psyche extremely well. :)

:) Like the story.
I've become addicted to Revolution.

That was a great view of Nate/Jason! A lot of it was the way I saw the actual tv character, well done!

Aww! Lovely story! I didn't think Jason/Nate was too split-personality at all. He kind of *needs* to be, to be in the militia while still loving Charlie. :) Nice job!

It was Good. It did come out a little like he's a little weird but its from a different view buy I think I got what you were trying to display. My suggestion for a new fanfiction is more Romance between Charlie and Jason like when he saved her what was going through his head? was he just protecting her because she was "innocent"? or was there more and like explain his feelings. I know i'm probably asking for to much but yeah