I'm sorry you're not feeling well, but I hope you'll get better soon. My advice would be: don't force yourself to write and take your time. Just take a break and when you feel better you can get back to your stories. And anyway, now you might be able to start writing about 13 :) Remember, don't stress yourself, I hope you get better soon.

I hate how she cries so much in the story. Like one little tick and the water gates flood. Though it annoys me I still like thi story

how much convincing would be required for smut chapters?x

When I was younger I read this story. It was one of my favourite dw fanfics. I was feeling nostalgic and read this again. Still an amazing story.

It actually inspired me to write my first dw fic (that I never got around to posting or continuing after like one chapter)

Sorry, I have a lot to say, but no idea how to say it. Even if it doesnt get continued it will hold a special place in my heart as a childhood favourite.

Please fix the you'res into your

Honestly getting tired of all the self pity she has. Sure we get it, it's hard to adjust to the situation, but when it's constant, it grates. Hoping it stops soon.

I really love this story and I hope you continue it! It’s long and Detailed, it’s the best I’ve read so far. Please continue with this, I’m not ready to stop reading !

So, Kari really means that he's a completely rubbish person who endangers everyone and everyone around him dies horribly. Great. I wonder if I'm the only one who dislikes her?Black

I'm confused why she needs to explain to him? They're not even together and this is as if saying that a someone can't date or kiss as they like so long someone else likes them. Redundant.

58,000 fans just punched the air...

Thank you for giving 9 a chance! Can’t wait for all the others!

I like this fic, it's nice! :D

Sorry to hear that this hasnt been going great for you, and I wish uou the best in getting back into this. I just wanted to say thank you for being my first Doctor Who fanfic, and for getting me into the fandom. I was really reluctant about getting into this fandom because I was afraid of the badly written poorly planned mary sue oc inserts that happen to be the Doctors companion, but reading this as my first Doctor Who fanfic has made me look forward to the others. You portray all the characters so perfectly that I can hear their voices reading the dialouge and Kari is a wonderful, realistic oc mc. She has all this power but doesnt magically become a saint, and isnt stupidly courageous. I hope you manage to find joy in writing this again and thank you for all the words.

I loved your story, it's very cool and I was wondering if you gave up on her or just been gone for a while.

Reread this story for the umpteenth time and I'm still loving it. Look forward to the next update.