Awesome detailing throughout! The monster was wholly visible in my mind thanks to your vivid description. I must say this fic has brought some questions to my mind, are these demon/spirit things even vulnerable to human weaponry in the movies or is this just a detail you decided to alter so the military could have an effective role? Would love to read a sequel!

Awesome story! I hope you finish this story because it was really good and well written. I never even imagined the possibility of the military getting involved, so that's awesome. Don't give up on this please!

This is the first fanfic i've read about the movie "Insidious", and I already think that it's the best one in the section. Very nice detail, and keeps the great suspense and horror, as well as mystery that these types of fanfics should have. Continue and do another chapter!

Just goes to show that the best stories hardly ever get the amount of reviews they deserve. This was phenomenal! I haven't seen 'Insidious', but your story stands for itself; this is an well-written, visceral work of horror/fiction that I would recommend to anyone who appreciates the genre.

"James cannot find the breath the scream." The second "the" should be "to".

Otherwise, this is a good story. The writing is very detailed and horrifying. :)