Reviews for A Life After |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute for a naughty start :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE these two :D I hope to see more of them :) Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() your story is awesome! please update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww! What girl wouldn't want this kind of relationship? Bravo my friend- it is a fun read! Cant wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love your rendition of their relationship :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE! You are a great writer and I love the way this is going! |
![]() ![]() Wow I really like it. I hope you continue and update soon. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Next! what happens next!"! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story! Can't wait for more chapters. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lord help me, Jake in a suit. -blushes beet red- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool man update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like it! Hope you update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the romance between the two. You really get the characters. I'm not usually one for happy. But I'm lovin it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Both funny and sweet. And it's a bit of a twist to the vibe the other fanfictions i've read give off - where Sherry is trying to live up to Jake's standards as opposed to the other way 'round. "Two hours is freakishly good stamina." He said. "We are both freaks." Sherry said with a smile... Probably my favourite bit :) I think you could easily add more to this, jus little bits. Like a series of one-shots. Especially seeing as you've spaced these two chapters a month apart. I look forward to reading more and keep my fingers crossed that enough people comment for you too be inspired... *HannaH* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love for you to continue. With all the hell Sherry went through, I would imagine the DSO giving her some time off before she returned to full duty. What better way than to spend it with Mr. Sexy? |