it was weird because i have read all the harry potter books and im not used to neville longbottom being the boy who lived

The siblings also need to keep an eternal and vigilant eye on establishment forces once they have succeeded in their war campaign. I am generally not a fan of second-chance fics, unless the knowledge of the figure travelling back in time or lands in a parallel universe is generally useless (e.g. unreliable or outdated), and therefore said figure can only go forth with a determined attitude. In the ASoIaF canon, is is suggested by Archmaester Marwyn that the Citadel conspired to kill off the Targaryens' dragons and weaken magic in general (although I would not be surprised if the Faith was in on the plot as well), the latter of which helped to keep the genetic consequences of multi-generational inbreeding in check. The lesson here is that incumbent powers do not like to cede any power to rising ones; therefore, even after the Citadel and the Faith were nominally integrated into the new Westeros political structure, they had conducted a long game plot to undermine the Targaryen dynasty. Thus, I sincerely hope that the siblings will be wise enough to continuously practice Moody's and Aegon's doctrines of "constant vigilance" and "a king should never sit easy".

Despite this chapter being well-written, it wastes a significant portion of the chapter on Longbottom. This is supposed to be a story about the Potter/Targaryen sibling lover trifecta conquering the world, not a Longbottom getting entertainingly stabbed with a dragon's spiked tail. Speaking of the siblings, the story sets them up as powerful both as individuals and as a group, yet their leader's plan is to jump in like a retarded dumpling (so typical of cannon fodders, a.k.a. Gryffindors), which should have gotten his dumb ass along with the sweet asses of his sisters killed, had it not been for the dragonfyre deus ex machina plot device. Lastly, if House Potter has managed to consistently produced powerful scions, why the hell do they need to pathetically cling onto House Longbottom like leeches? They could reasonably have gotten themselves elevated into nobility through impressive deeds accomplished for the crown, or became powerful military commanders, high-ranking officials, and business magnets; instead, the audience is supposed to believe that the heads of House Potter were all so incompetent that its members are only considered to be little better than commoners? Inconceivable!

At least Ivy and Rose are looking very happy to spend some quality clothing-free time with their brother(-lover).

(This review was originally posted on HPFFA, where the story, as of the time of this review, has just the intro chapter.)

I am so glad that this story has a second chapter (even though the story has not been updated since 2015). I originally read the first chapter on HPFFA, and found it to be very promising. But since that story has been stagnant since 2014, I desperately wanted to find more stories with the premise of Aegon/Rhaenys/Visenya reincarnated as Hadrian/his sisters (by the way, since he is going to be living up to his conquering past, please consider formalising Harry's name to Hadrian. After all, Harry is a weak diminutive, whereas Hadrian's Wall is named after the famous Roman emperor). Thus I searched for Whitetigerwolf's Conquer Reborn challenge thread to see who else might have taken a shot at it, and was happy to find your profile, under which this story has two chapters instead of one! I digress.

A quick question before I dive into my review: will this story take place in the HP universe, or will the appropriate characters be transposed into the ASoIaF world?

I very much enjoy this chapter. It is especially pleasing to see the siblings awakening their Valyrian looks after their baptism (I am an atheist, but there is no more fitting word to describe the event) by dragon fire (I still need to state my displeasure over Hadrian's retarded dumpling maneuver to die such an ignoble death over nothing and Ivy's and Rose's committment to die beside their brother(-lover) without first attempting to defend themselves.). One aspect of Hadrian's mentality that might prove troublesome in the future is his dogmatic view on doing everything and anything for family. First of all, what is family? Merely sharing genes or kinship with someone do not automatically make them family. Family should be in the eye of the beholder. If Joffrey is my brother, I will immediately boot this NON-FAMILIAL psychopathic incompetent fool into an incinerator without hesitation. Second, while loyalty to family is important, Hadrian cannot be so myopic about it as to put it ahead of other important moral values.

It is gratifying to see that the siblings have long held some less than platonic affections for each other, a smolder that was rudely dampened by their mother Lily. As their other selves' personalities emerge more, I hope that their defiance and disregard for societal limitations will only increase with their growths in maturity, ambition, and power. I can already see Rhaenys' teasing and devious nature in Rose, especially when she successfully goads her beloved brother into a flustered state over tactically acknowledging his continued sexual desire for herself and Ivy. As for Ivy, while apparently an alpha bitch, she is definitely an icy warrior princess in the vein of Visenya, although no doubt her brother will be able to set her loins on fire. As for Hadrian, he is already subconsciously preparing for some conquering like Aegon, for he is attempting to hatch the three dragon eggs with fire and magic.

This time around, I very much hope that the siblings will not repeat the small mistakes that prevented the Targaryen siblings' relationship from being as strong as it could have been. In the canon, it has been suggested that Rhaenys had other lovers beside her brother. And more disturbingly, her son might not have been Aegon's. Also, while Visenya no doubted loved her brother, there is the feeling that they married more for tradition rather than love, which was not helped by Aegon stupidly and blatantly favouring his younger sister (Rhaenys) to regularly warm his bed over his older sister (Visenya). I am sure more sexual affection between the two elder siblings could have helped to temper some of Maegor's more extreme tendencies. Therefore, Hadrian needs to regularly remind his two sister-wives, through words and deeds, that he loves equally, and that they belong to him and him alone. This I am not too worried about, since Hadrian is already mentally posturing possessively over other males lusting over HIS sisters.

I absolutely love Ivy and Fleur's, both talented and haughty beauties, rivalry. While it is indeed possible that their passive-agressive verbal cat fight was contributed by Ivy's need to vent her repressed sexual desires for her brother, it can also partly come from Ivy's need to mark her territory in front of a possible sexual rival. Fleur herself now is at least drawn to Hadrian, and now they are entering into a fun cat and mouse game.

I am very much interested in seeing this story being continued; therefore, if you want help, I can provide it during my free time. If you have lost interest in this story, I am thinking of continuing this story, with some changes, such as deemphasing Longbottom's relevance.

Please update!

please update, it starts interesting

I’m Curious if this story will continue.

Cool some real potential!

Since you've been so kind as to leave me good reviews whenever I update I know you are alive XD

So please, please please, don't let this fic die. It is by far the HP/GoT crossover that has the most potential, and I can't wait to see it updated.

Cheers
Daemon Belaerys

More?

I love it!

do revive and update this please it's VERY interesting

Hope you update...

please update this story soon! please!

Hope this story continues real soon! I'm finding it surprisingly enjoyable!

Please update this story soon it is very good and has a very interesting premise please don't abandon it also I'm rooting for Harry marrying Fleur as well as his sister wives