Omg that was so amazing I loved it so much. Please, please, please write more like this. I love Malec so much and this was really amazing. Thank you for taking the time to write this.

THAT WAS SO GOOD!

This is soo good!

fuck! it's the best story (rated M) I've read .. the hot scenes are perfect and Magnus holds feline characteristics makes it better ... but above all the strength and passion they feel for each other and the doubts generated by the possibility of harm to others is so, so, so tender, sweet, adorable ... I love it. thanks for writing and sharing your imagination.

I loved it. Great. That is all I can say

I loved all of it, especially the fluff part at the end.

This was positively amazing ! such a joy to read. the fluff part made me tear up /.\ I hope you continue doing your marvelous work!

Apparently breath play wasn't what I thought it was...oh well :/

I would LOVE it if you wrote the two fics you mentioned at the bottom. PLEASE i NNEEEEEEDDDD a sub!Alec/Dom!Magnus breathe play PLEEEEEEAAAAASSEEEEEE!? Some hair pulling would be great too. ;D

Wow. This is HOT!
It was just... ah! I have a thing for cat!Magnus, and sub!Magnus dom!Alec so this was just brilliant. And the fluff bit at the end... amazing, truly. Especially since i love our warlock when hes vunerable.
Just amazing.

I must say...I really /really/ liked your guys' writing. I'm a bit at loss, so let's just say...yeah. I /really/ want to see more of your plans updated. As feedback, Magnus Dom is preference!(?) Nonetheless, I loved all of this. It's one of those things I came for the smut but want more because of the delectable fluff. Truly. It's dreamy and a perfect Magnus/Alec fairytale. Thank you! Please write more.

Before I begin my criticism of this, I'm gonna just tell you that this was fucking hot and while I don't believe these characters would ever end up in a relationship like this, I also love what you did with it XD Now, as to the grammar. For the most part, the grammar was awesome. The only problem I had with it - and it was a pretty big problem - was that instead of telling us at the beginning who had played Magnus and who Alec, y'all decided that you were both going to speak in first person, and that you were just gonna tell us who was writing which part. All in all, that makes for a rather confusing fic, and a very hard-to-get-into fic. In future, I'd suggest telling us at the beginning who played who, and then writing it all in third person. It's not that hard to change first person to third person, so you can still RP it, you'd just have to go back later and change the POV. Still, as I said at first, this was really hot, so well done -

*gapes, jaw hanging open, and eyes widened* This is sub-conscious speaking, consciousness is currently riding on a fan-girl induced cloud 9 high, look can't you see it flying over head, but anyway I'm here to say that inner fan-girl, consciousness, and inner yaoi lover all agree on the fact that the story was absolute smuty goodness. That is all good day.

Your story is awesome ! I loved it so much, and the fluff near the end You captured the essence of Alec so well. It was pure pleasure reading it :)

Hope You'll write more stories soon

A.V

This was pretty great :) Kitty Magnus is pretty amazing ;)