please finish the story! its really good!

Oh! It makes me want to read more! Please add more!
He he. Palm tree

Update Soon!

Please update I really like this story already. :3

I hope you update soon. (:

So far, I'm kind of neutral with this story. There are some good points and some bad points.

I do feel like this story is a bit too fast paced. When Envy kidnapped Hazel, it took me awhile to figure out what was going on. And her befriending Wrath that quickly was unrealistic.

But on the bright side, I do love how you write Envy's character overall. I would like to see more of his P.O.V. And the third chapter was pure win XD.

Overall, this has the potential to be really good as long as you take your time. Hope you can update soon :).

Can't wait! :D
Scarlet

YAY!

Thank you guys for the super nice reviews, annnd the quite agressive ones . I'll find a way to publish as soon as i can. Thanks so much guys 3

If I find that person who told you that crap, I'm gonna be so pissed of mad. The story was so great, I have for a whole Goddamn week then I find out that! I mean what the hell!? Do your own computer? Why don't you continue with it. I'm sure everyone, including me, would want you to continue. So please, find a way. This is too great for it to end like that! ;)

I was looking forward to the next chapter, good luck in finding a way to publish again.

Damn it! If I ever meet that person who told you can't publish stories, I ought kick his or her ass! I mean what the hell! I don't give a crap if they told you can't publish, I want you to continue! You have an amazing talent, something maybe I can't compete. Try and find a way to publish stories again. ;)

I hope you find a way to publish again. I want to continue. You're stories are awesome! ;)

Ummm... its actually nee-san for sister and onee-san for big sister

;-; Please find a way to publish.. I loved this story.