Hi, there. I have a request for you after reading this chapter: can you make a short story where Peeta's mother gets put on trial for her abusing Peeta? I never liked her and I want to see her get what she deserves when she goes too far. I also hate Peeta's dad for being a pathetic bystander to allow this abuse, so hopefully he'll be facing charges at trial for his neglecting despite his nice attitude toward his son. Thanks.

bro just wanna point out that after the baby comes out you have to push out the afterbirth! also, it takes six weeks usually for everything to heal and between six to eight for you to start having sex again

This is the bite thing ever I love the sexy parts of the story

verey good story bit to much sex don't think eve suits the kid but well done it is an exceelent book can wait to read number 2

I cry every time I read the word 'Always'

That you for not having Katniss go into the arena

I gotta say...Honey tho? They have only been together a month but they r already referring 2 each other as if they r a married couple...just constructive criticism so don't get offended..

I love your story, the only thing that kind of drove me crazy is you forgot one of Gale's siblings. In the books, it says he has 3 siblings. 12 year old Rory, 10 year old Vick and 4 year old Posy. But it's still the best fan fiction story I have ever read.

awesome

I love this story

I really like this. But you could say breast instead of boob. Sounds better

Very emotional and touching I really do love the story so far and please just let Katniss and Peeta live in peace without having to deal with Gale i'd really like that a lot

Your book is utterly amazing. Perfectly put together and perfectly plotted context. Excellent job.

I like the plot and it makes a strong statement. However, always remember, think about what the character itself would say if it was in that moment. You'll figure it out.

you know how katniss and peeta have to say that when they took those berries because they were so crazy in love? then maybe gale can say he was too in love to think rationally?!