El personaje es una mierda, y me acordé de por que no me gustan los personajes " buenos" en Harry Potter , siempre es lo mismo, ayuda al trío, siempre con miedo de cambiar el canon, parece nunca tener un poco de inteligencia , será débil para no afectar la trama, arrastrandose como un perro con el trío, etc ía seguir escribiendo mucho más, pero es demasiado.
Para los lectores le advierto que si no te gusta que un SI o OC cuente sus secretos esto no es para ti( nunca entendí por qué los autores creen que es bueno decirles que sabe todo por qué lo leyó en un libro, aún no lo dice, pero como se comporta el mc es 100% seguro que lo hará de una forma o otra). Mas que nada por lo último pienso que la historia no llaga a tener ni la mitad de los lectores que tal vez tendría .Bye

brilliant ending, pulled the fuck outta my heart strings at the end though, I love the way you shaped all of the characters personalities based on his insert into the hp universe, sure of the best work I have read with a satisfying ending, is old now, but don't ever knock the classics

Dropped at chapter 3. Who the fuck tells people their secrets! And why do you have to allow people to boss you around. I never been a fan of this and never will be. Every single fan fic has a hermione vigorously stepping over people's boundaries. This annoys me to no end.. I don't understand if every author is a closeted masochist. They make MCs getting stepped on by people.. a normal person would have been annoyed and found it rude when someone digs their nose so close to them. By reading it I get overwhelmed with annoyance. Damn all the authors. I cant get a single fan fic that has reasonable characters.. either there is a paedophile, a pervert who keeps thinks with his balls, a wimpy one who let's people decide for them having no self respect and dignity letting people invade their personal space repeatedly or just the passive kind who keeps telling that they won't interfere with the plot but ends up changing everything and then finds themselves in knee deep trouble because they were foolish enough to make decisions without thinking.. fuck all.

It's kinda ludicrous that a young adult would get forced by fourteen year olds to give up this much information. This was by far the weakest set up to reveal information that only he knew that I've seen in a while. If it was going to be like this even though I'm strongly on the team that likes full immersion when reading stories like this and severely dislike it when characters go all "your life is a book" and tells everyone. It would've made sense to just have Dumbledore to mind grape the answers out of him from the beginning. At least that way I could preserve the thought that somebody wouldn't be dumb enough to single handedly put himself in a position I which the previous statement would 100% happen.

Omake 3 kills me because Dumbledore playing along is something I feel he would 100% do.

dick story

fucking shit pointless fic

What a story. I'm glad I read this and didn't choose to dismiss it due to it being a self insert. Thank you Redditor who recommended this fic. I loved it start to finish.

A good read, laughed a lot, ending was slightly predictable but well executed.

Thanks for another enjoyable chapter,,,

This was definitely a funny chapter

Thanks for another enjoyable chapter

Definitely a rather fun first chapter

Just him with that info and just being dumb about it is just pathetic :/ I tried I really did try to enjoy this fanfic but with the MC keeping telling people to not trust him they should be scared and all this info lol it’s just bad

Does anyone know any fanfiction that is like this because it was so good. By that I mean a long self insert I don't mind if it is a gary stue