Amazing! Another chapter please!

I liked the entire story, but my favorite part was the sweet ending, when they agree that their favorite is when they make love. I'm very sappy and sentimental when it comes to love and I loved that part. You should consider writing a story about that. I think you could do a nice job and make it very sweet and loving, as well as hot and steamy!

Yes! All i have to say.

I've read this story so many times and I STILL love it! They're so in love, yet also respectful too and they do it so well ;) I still love it! I'd give you a high five if I could

Amazing! :) just a few type-o s but amazing! :D

*Fanning myself* Whew! Those gals are really nasty and naughty. Fun and smutty.

its good that you added something loving in the end ;) I cannot imagine those two as only ...dunno... fuck buddies in a relationship xD u know your story is the first one I read that containes intercourse, and especially this type xD the two of them are way too warm and angelic and I was so afraid I d be disappointed by the description of their more concrete sexual encounter, but U actually surprised me in a fantastic way :) Ok a bar scene was way too much, I admit , it really was... but everything else... very very nice and very good :) I do like! And actually I can imagine the two of them going this crazy over each other :D

I d love to have a girlfriend I m truly in love with and vice versa and who d love to have sex anyplace, anytime... :)

but i m only stuck with those who like to hold hands and nothing more -.-

Why do people see sex as something bad -.-

hot!

SO FUCKING GOOD

this was DEF one of the best one-shots I've read like .. ever .! love it , but also can't read in ANY public setting (: