This is so great!

Surgeon General warning in neon and three languages.

Where you on the mission listen in? Never read a better sense of listening in myself. Well done!

Now, I must look up the horrors of dialysis and rout Stark on ranting at the staff.

This is so great! Tony is so adorably distant-caring and Steve is just precious no matter what :)

First—let’s do stupid the genius Avenger and the Avenger leader cannot figure out bloated with green backs running around with a body guard aka bummed out form secret guy is great for a vacation, but is best left to costume parties.

Second—Stark and Rogers trapped in a hit box in a hotter desert is unique and well played. I was scared they would go ahead and die by heat stroke.

Third—the hospital recovery was just right with Thor’s nervous eating and Stark’s cell phone adventure. It is easy to see was Cap is Cap, and dragging a dialysis machine firm the hall makes and interesting mental image. Nice to see Hero Clint leading the way, with Hawkeye as Roger’s nurse which everyone recognized Steve that does not have a clue.

Best is Tony the secret mother hen, which he will deny until he hyperventilated and faints. Woe is me then Tony Stark slices and dices the careless nurses etc. who let Steve Rogers Captain America, his own Capsicle in misery for 6, that is 6 hours.

I am emotional. Honest to goodness this is such a heartwarming compilation of these two idiots playing off each other in such a life threatening circumstance. Tony being such a little shit, and Steve being an equally useless doofus. This dialogue is absolutely delectable, the tiny overheating room pressing in from all edges, mystery group being just awful enough to drop 2 whole water bottles in this deplorable tease - I am in LOVE. and the pain! yes! SUFFERING OF THE HIGHEST DEGREE. STEVE IS JUST OUT. DONE. TONY BE FREAKIN OUT AND I'M RIGHT NEXT TO HIM, USELESSLY POKING THE UNCONSCIOUS ONE. also the line ab orphanage and depression and not eating was incredibly well timed and Tony needs to stop and think ab that more often cause Steve is a gotdarn train wreck of a human and its nice when he slips up and admits it.

thank you for writing this. its lovely.

Too short to make the army and serve his country and help people and have a purpose. I love your style of writing

Loved the dynamic between those two in the first part and Steve's explanation (if I interpreted it correctly) was so sweet.

I can't remember if I've reviewed for this or not, but in case I haven't, I'm going to leave one now. I LOVE this story. So often people forget that there are a ton of BAD things about the serum - I mean a lot of good things too, considering how sickly Steve was before it - but there are so many negative ones too and I think you really pinpoint that without making Steve seem overly weak either. You balance that so nicely. I love the way you write each of the characters as well - very well done and very enjoyable.

Great job and thank for sharing this!

Nice.

I really enjoyed the h/c here, and protectiveness from Tony! Great job.

protective tony gives me life

Very interesting take on what other potential side effects the serum would have on Steve.

Enjoyed reading this. Thank you for posting.

w-was that a dick joke? oh my god. great story

I keep coming back and re-reading this fic over and over. It's one of my favorites, thanks so much for writing it!