Reviews for Contracted
Guest chapter 8 . 11/22/2019
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2018
what the fuck am I reading why is she calling a stranger sister?she has been abused all her life supposedly so why does she trust right from the start?
Desswiydfg chapter 19 . 6/29/2018
Dear author-san
On the 101 paragraph u switch to first person
Example: he mocked through agonized breathes, knowing that with my ribs and with my shoulder, I wouldn't be able to move
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As I said u switched to first person, but as I kept on reading it went back to third person.
Just to let u know!
:)
Greensword101 chapter 21 . 1/14/2018
I will gladly take it, this concept is good and I want to help out. Koby, you helped me not give up a few times, let me do this for you. Nice change in the user, btw :)
animecutylover chapter 10 . 3/30/2016
Lol.

Poor them.
animecutylover chapter 9 . 3/30/2016
Yay~!

They passed!

That was an interesting adventure.
:)
animecutylover chapter 8 . 3/30/2016
Lol.

She sure has great luck.

Maybe Lady Luck likes her.
animecutylover chapter 7 . 3/30/2016
Omg!

Yay~!

She got an idea!
XD
animecutylover chapter 6 . 3/30/2016
Lol.

He gave them a clue, but it seems that they are bad at it.
animecutylover chapter 5 . 3/30/2016
Omg!

Shika's on Team 7?!
O-O

It makes sense. If Naru's not the dead last, then it's Shika, since he WAS second for dead last.

Lol.

What a nice introduction meeting.
animecutylover chapter 4 . 3/30/2016
Is it the goddess?
animecutylover chapter 3 . 3/30/2016
Lol.

Kakashi's still a teen here? Wow.
animecutylover chapter 2 . 3/30/2016
What?
animecutylover chapter 1 . 3/30/2016
Omg!
What?
Goddess of Destruction?! O-O
GoTherka chapter 20 . 3/30/2016
Naruto certainly doesn't look like she is going to kick anyone's ass... And really, how could she think Kakashi would get himself killed like that! I don't know why, normally I quite like canon Naruto (though he is annyoing at times), but this girl is just pathetic it hurts to read about her, she is unreliable and would get herself and her teammates killed. I get she doesn't want to kill anyone but was it that hard to render the guy unconcious... Oh dear, like this she is unfit to be a ninja :( And I really liked this story, everything is great, the plot, the idea of the curse... everything but the main character. You are evidently good writer but this version of Naru has unlikeable personality :(
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