Please update this fic! Don't let it die!

So did you drop this?

Will this story please get updated?

Such a great story

You handled the training montage and the emotional scenes well without making them cheesy. Well done, there.

Chiffon shouldn't be punished, or if anything just given a slap on the wrist. Miyabi and her limiters were conspiring to murder Kazuya after previously attacking him, and had nearly murdered Eugene in the process. While I'm glad Kazuya was able to stop Chiffon from killing Miyabi (killing is serious even when justified), the latter more than deserved the beatdown she got. Looking at this in conjunction with Satellizer getting punished for defending herself and Kazuya from Ganessa, it seems like Chevalier rules don't allow for defense of self and others from other Pandora, or are at least biased to put defenders at a disadvantage, which just rubs me the wrong way.

CD

This story was a lie! :'(

Or maybe I was just expecting too much?

Either way, Kazuya is still making the same mistakes that turn him into someone that is to be protected instead of someone that protects.

And to top it all off, this story is never going to get updated ever again, which means we are still stuck with baby, naive, wuss Kazuya instead of a mature, smart, powerful Kazuya.

Sad, sad, sad. I give this a 1/10, but it's only there because I feel sorry for you.

could I take this story over if your not gonna finish?

Damn shame you haven't updated this in awhile, love the story.

I really want to see what happens next!

Looking forward to next chapter.

Keep up the great work!

lost interest the second you did the same stupid introduction with satelizer especially since he has been training and should have better control over his emotions this was supposed to be au but its still just like canon

Another great premise that isn't being finished.

"More chapters sooner rather than later, I promise!"

Almost 2 Years Later

... Welp, I just found this and sincerely wish there was more. This is extremely interesting and, unlike most of the work on this site, actually looks like its been proofread! But more than that you seemed to be taking the romance slow and keeping it all realistic rather than having all the girls throw themselves at Kazuya which, aside from his badass freezing prowess/fight scenes, was probably my favorite thing about this series.

Followed and Faved in hopes that you revisit/finish this someday.

Daarn it, please update!? Chiffon's punishment is still undecided and Attia and Satella are going to fight! The next chapter, if completed would be awesome.