YES. OH GODS YES. I have been waiting for this. But no this isn't weird it's one of the best stories here I belive (and I still love chapter 9). But yes I'm glad you are going to continue this.

I love this story so I'll put this nicely. FINISH THE DAMN STORY! The suspense is killing me! You said it would be out by August 20 2013, it is now March 5 2014! Hurry up!

Oh my gosh, okay, after reading that chapter I have just one thought on my mind...is Snotlout okay? Seriously though, does Alvin the terrible really have to be so...terrible? Okay, yes, I guess he sort of does. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this. I just had to review this chapter though, just to say, that.

Hi! I love your story a lot! And this is my favorite hpter, and I feell so sorry for Snotlout because he lost his dad (hich I totally didn't expect) and you made me like Spitelout even more than I already did because yo gave im so much more deth than most people! Than you

What a turnout! The drama and suspense is completely and utterly amazing! I just love how the teens are starting to sort of grow up in all of this! I especially adore your take on Snotlout's character development! It's brilliant and very fitting!
I feel so bad for Tuffnut! I admire your take on his confusion because it's like how is he going to react?!
Nice touch putting in how Hookfang instantly went to go rescue Snotlout! That was just so sweet and awesome! Keep up the phenomenal work! :D

Awesome chapter! Good luck with your exams!

! Hugs! *glomps*
Aw, Hookfang does care for Snotlout. I know you showed it before, but still. Ah, Tuffnut: every guard and interrogator's worst nightmare. You got to love that kid.
Yeah, you might want to go back and edit. You spelled Tuffnut as Tufnfut at one point.

What an amazing chapter! The pure amount of details and povs was unbelievable! I really liked how you balanced each point of view. Snotlout and Ruffnut were my favorites because we saw sides of them normally hidden. It seems that the battle is starting to turn around for the riders!

Why haven't you updated ?! Ughhh. Its been a monthh! Waaa

Awww, I liked that dragon. But you did warn us it was dark so...

I think this chapter was great! I love the description, the explanation of Hiccup's moods, the portrayal of characters, and the fact that you don't make a beeline to get to the end of the story but have other events going on as well.

Since you say that you think this chapter is rubbish compared to the others, I look forward to reading even more terrific chapters ahead! Thank you!

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