:D Brilliant

I really like this story. Is there going to be a sequel? Hopefully, angels, daleks, or the master? OR JACK HARKNESS! THAT WOULD BE AMAZING.

It was a nicely balanced story, and it all came to a complete circle. I like that you didn't fully explain the backgrounds of Will and Amelia - it's good to leave some things to the imagination.

hmm i didnt like the ending... poor writing on the authors part... JUST KIDDING ITS FANTASTIC BBY!

Gosh I wonder what's gonna happen next! I can't even imagine! UPDATE SOON! ;P haahahahahahaha

Finally! The Doctor's a little slow. How many times did Amelia say "M-River?"

Next chapter please.

Oh my gosh! Wow, what a revelation! This was such a nice twist of events. Although I had secretly wished that Amelia was actually Amy, the fact that she's the Doctor's daughter is also nice! Great chapter! Looking forward to the final one!

Nice and enjoyable. Keep smiling. :-)

Oh wow! Please update soon!

I've been to Silverton before. It is pretty. Anyway, so far good story.

Puppy dog eyes? Really Will, where'd that get you. Can't wait to find out.

River really needs to give a certain young lady time out.

o my god! thats amazing, fantastic, briliant! keep writing! :)

I'll be honest. I'm finding this story a little difficult to get into. BUT. It seems to be getting more interesting now they've got Will. So. I'll wait and look forward for more updates! :) Also, I'd like to say that I think Amelia is River's daughter :)

No!

Update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

The suspense builds!

This story deserves a lot more reviews than it has. Great work!